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                    You

laughed at me because
     
                                                       I

                             was

{helplessinlovefrailfragile}

     weak.

                       I

hate being weak

[and getting laughed at]

/so

    I

{beratedscreamedvoweddetermined]

          told myself that I
            
                             would not be weak.

And so:

I trained, I saw, I conquered, I questioned, I hoped, I grew.

And so:

You watched, you stopped, you heard, you listened, you understood.

    ---and like a rose---

                  I unfurled

                              and transformed before your very eyes.
©2008 =starlight15
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This is purely experimental. Expect tons of changes made to this.

I got the lines "and like a rose, I unfurled" stuck in my head and put it down to some good use :) Although re-reading this, I suppose a better title and subject to compare the growth by would be a butterfly. Ah well, life's not perfect. Use your imagination ;)
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*Tenten-10:iconTenten-10: Mar 1, 2008, 7:33:33 PM
:heart::heart::clap: ABOSLUTELOVE and the way everything is formed out is awesum....reminds of nejiten XDDD but everything does so...^^;

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I strongly believe in GOD and his ways and that will NEVER change
:heart:GOD:heart:NEJITEN:heart:

I am TenTen in schnitzal's Anime Crew!
If you cried when Axel Faded, copy and past this into your signature.
Proud member of the ~Anti-NejiHina :3
=starlight15:iconstarlight15: Mar 1, 2008, 7:35:02 PM
LOL Neji/Tenten rocks my socks (:

And thank you :heart: I've seen so many awesome poetry/prose written like this that I really wanted to try it.

<33 hugs, starlight

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Atra esterní ono thelduin
Mor'ranr lífa unin hjarta onr
Un du evarínya ono varda

May good fortune rule over you,
Peace live in your heart,
And the stars watch over you.

:batty: From 'Eldest' by Christopher Paolini

Photography: ~sunshine15
*Tenten-10:iconTenten-10: Mar 1, 2008, 8:11:34 PM
Yesh, yesh it does XDD

Yes you did a wonderful lovely job :aww:

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I strongly believe in GOD and his ways and that will NEVER change
:heart:GOD:heart:NEJITEN:heart:

I am TenTen in schnitzal's Anime Crew!
If you cried when Axel Faded, copy and past this into your signature.
Proud member of the ~Anti-NejiHina :3
*IchigoSweetie3:iconIchigoSweetie3: Mar 2, 2008, 12:41:40 AM Mood: Love
:cries: So lovely, I enjoyed reading it every second :heart:

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"Sometimes life is hard, you get a few cuts, a few brusies, and maybe broken bones. But Never! I mean never, give up for what you believe"

~ :damphyr: IcHiGo - cHaN :damphyr: ~
=starlight15:iconstarlight15: Mar 2, 2008, 10:06:57 AM
Thank you :heart:

<33 hugs, starlight

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Atra esterní ono thelduin
Mor'ranr lífa unin hjarta onr
Un du evarínya ono varda

May good fortune rule over you,
Peace live in your heart,
And the stars watch over you.

:batty: From 'Eldest' by Christopher Paolini

Photography: ~sunshine15
~dark-fang-alph:icondark-fang-alph: Mar 3, 2008, 11:19:51 AM
very good

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Ein Engel vom Himmel

an angel of the sky
=starlight15:iconstarlight15: Mar 3, 2008, 6:34:26 PM
Thank you :hug:

<33 hugs, starlight

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Atra esterní ono thelduin
Mor'ranr lífa unin hjarta onr
Un du evarínya ono varda

May good fortune rule over you,
Peace live in your heart,
And the stars watch over you.

:batty: From 'Eldest' by Christopher Paolini

Photography: ~sunshine15
~dark-fang-alph:icondark-fang-alph: Mar 4, 2008, 3:28:58 PM
your welcome :hug: :XD:

--
Ein Engel vom Himmel

an angel of the sky